Score: 7

"hudhvlz"

submission: Under Different Circumstances

date: July 28, 2009

The production side of the song is good, and it seems to be missing something. It also feels repetitive and it doesn't really go anywhere.

I realise that it's not actually that repetitive, but it feels very repetitive. Try changing which track has the focus every so often and make the leading track more prominent.

Score: 8

"amfojdsafljn"

submission: Love Rocket

date: July 8, 2009

Just so you know, Classic Rock and Classical Rock are two different genres - Classical Rock is rock that incorporates techniques, sounds, and instruments used in Classical music.

Great song though :D Personally, I'd say just bring the backing guitar, bass, and drums up a bit. Or lower the solo guitar and the vocals.

Here's an idea: After the guitar solo, you could have kept the lead guitar going and accompanying the vocals with another contrasting guitar ... solo ...

Great song :D

Score: 9

"Triadalithe"

submission: Bull in Field - Swines

date: June 13, 2009

Awesome, great sounding - sounds like real punk.

Only piece of advice I can think of is maybe raise the volume of the vocals when the whole stereo thing's going on.

Score: 7

"Missing something"

submission: Punk Instrumental

date: April 5, 2009

It feels like it's missing something :\

Score: 10

"Haniilicious"

submission: Anthem For The Ordinary

date: March 15, 2009

Can I just suggest that you use a slightly weaker DeEsser for your songs? Not so much in this song, but for the songs in your album that aren't up here.

Score: 9

"Shazbat"

submission: Forgotten Heart

date: March 15, 2009

This would be amazing with vocals.

I honestly wish I could give a better review for this, but I can't think of anything I dislike about it.

With vocals, it would be a 10/10 ;)

Score: 10

"Ripples"

submission: Hero to Zero

date: December 31, 2008

I played this at a small private party when I was doing the music and when the intro started, there was a small ripple of cheers among the people at the party.

You know it's a good song when, even though people have never even heard of it before, they will still cheer when it comes on.

Besides that, this is personally one of my favourite songs in the audio portal - it's a shame you don't do more music.

Score: 8

"Poodles."

submission: Iron Man _-_-AT

date: December 30, 2008

Good cover, but I definitely feel it could be improved.

I like the actual guitar sound, but I have two gripes about the guitar: The stops are too sudden and there's not enough dynamics.

I'd suggest using effects on top of the Slayer guitar, instead of relying on the slayer plugin's own effects (apart from a few guitar-specific or slayer-specific effects like tremolo, although I use Guitar Amp Pro on top of it for that). For instance, I have a preset I made I call the Screw Guitar which is the Slayer 2 plugin with Guitar Amp Pro, Stereo Spread, and GoldVerb over the top of it.

Another thing is on small note changes, you could try using a pitchbend to change to the desired note instead of creating a new one - this can make the guitar sound more natural.

Score: 5

"Inner Rock Out?"

submission: Ultimate Attack

date: November 17, 2008

Sounds like you've taken liberal samples from "Inner Rock Out" by Zappy414 ( http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/98009 ) ... It's also "a wee bit" repetitive ...

Score: 9

"Oodles ..."

submission: To the End of The World

date: November 14, 2008

A great song, a brilliantly composed piece. Just one suggestion though: The piano seems a little sharp at the start - I'd suggest softening the piano until the song gets heavier.