HaniiPuppy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[§Arbiter§ - Memories of W]

great, but too short

It feels like you just sort of cut it off at the end. In my opinion, you should continue it, It would be amazing as a full-length song.

Arbiter responds:

I am aware of the shortness of the song, I am.
I just felt like there wasn't any good turn I could make for it to have enhanced length, thus ending up as a short song, but know that I will try to submit longer songs in the future, in addition to shorter ones.

[The Human Behind Crazy Frog]

Mopeds

He was trying to impersonate a Moped, what else would he be trying to do? :P

beanips13 responds:

as you know from the description this is a contest to see who has the best idea of what he is trying to do. tell your friends about this so they can try to tell me what they think

MOOOOOPPPPPPPEEEEDDDDD

[Kill Kill Kill]

butterscotch

can't really think of much beyond that it's just a tad bit repetitive and and vocals are almost completely drowned out by the instruments and the drums are still kinda quiet. The guitar's too loud. Is this a live recording? If it is, i suggest you get a computer and use a multi-track recorder (ie garageband, and i think audacity can do it, both are free) to record each instrument separately and tweak it, change the volumes, etc.

The guitar almost completely drowns out everything else ...

blood-angel5 responds:

nah its not live, we just had a shitting recording tool we used on my comp. we as a band did recognize the problems but it was just for the demo. we are re-recording it along with the other 3 songs and a few new songs coming soon. but i do appreciate your feedback

lol and one more thing...just remember, its shitty new york hardcore. but thanx again

[To Be Reborn...]

Great song ^_^

Great song ^_^ although it did seem similar all the way through, have you thought about using both fast and slow tempos as well as varying amounts of intricacy to create mood-changes for the different situations in the song?

I'd say this is more Classical than goth ... doesn't matter if it's dark or not, if it's dark, then it's just dark classical :P

ParishIsDead responds:

Thanks for the criticism! However, the tempos changed minutely back and forth as the song progressed. Especially when the bells sounded.

But I understand the purpose of what you meant. Thanks for the 9!!!

[Death's sorrow]

little repetitive

Very good, but it's a little repetitive. Was expecting a hard part to come in - it's just begging for Cavern drums and a distorted guitar playing a slow melody.

Psychopath responds:

I'll see what I can do about that.

[Captain Fantastic and the...]

ipods oO

The first and last minute makes me feel like it should be in one of the silhouette ipod adverts xP

[Monkeys]

Hi-Fi

This sounds amazing on my Hi-Fi

ChucksNation responds:

Awesome :)

[Canon in D (rock remix)]

Does anyone read the review titles?

The drum's a little too fast and annoying, try slowing it down and giving it unique rhythm, possibly changing it every so often throughout the song. The sound also seems to drop out for short moments. Could also be a bit longer.

Also try using a better midi set, the guitar that you used is painful to listen to.

Incidentally, you've got 2 parts of the song played by the lead guitar, the guitar part and the backing chords which are usually played by strings. If you must use a guitar for it, try using a repeating electric bass.

Lastly, it would add a bit of uniqueness and make it sound better if you used instrumental ornaments - there were several points where a trill would have been ample, for instance.

otherwise, good try ^_^