Score: 9

"great, but too short"

submission: §Arbiter§ - Memories of War

date: July 10, 2008

It feels like you just sort of cut it off at the end. In my opinion, you should continue it, It would be amazing as a full-length song.

Score: 6

"Mopeds"

submission: The Human Behind Crazy Frog

date: June 25, 2008

He was trying to impersonate a Moped, what else would he be trying to do? :P

Score: 5

"butterscotch"

submission: Kill Kill Kill

date: May 26, 2008

can't really think of much beyond that it's just a tad bit repetitive and and vocals are almost completely drowned out by the instruments and the drums are still kinda quiet. The guitar's too loud. Is this a live recording? If it is, i suggest you get a computer and use a multi-track recorder (ie garageband, and i think audacity can do it, both are free) to record each instrument separately and tweak it, change the volumes, etc.

The guitar almost completely drowns out everything else ...

Score: 9

"Great song ^_^"

submission: To Be Reborn...

date: May 14, 2008

Great song ^_^ although it did seem similar all the way through, have you thought about using both fast and slow tempos as well as varying amounts of intricacy to create mood-changes for the different situations in the song?

I'd say this is more Classical than goth ... doesn't matter if it's dark or not, if it's dark, then it's just dark classical :P

Score: 8

"little repetitive"

submission: Death's sorrow

date: April 18, 2008

Very good, but it's a little repetitive. Was expecting a hard part to come in - it's just begging for Cavern drums and a distorted guitar playing a slow melody.

Score: 10

"ipods oO"

submission: Captain Fantastic and the...

date: April 11, 2008

The first and last minute makes me feel like it should be in one of the silhouette ipod adverts xP

Score: 10

"Hi-Fi"

submission: Monkeys

date: March 31, 2008

This sounds amazing on my Hi-Fi

Score: 4

"Does anyone read the review titles?"

submission: Canon in D (rock remix)

date: February 27, 2008

The drum's a little too fast and annoying, try slowing it down and giving it unique rhythm, possibly changing it every so often throughout the song. The sound also seems to drop out for short moments. Could also be a bit longer.

Also try using a better midi set, the guitar that you used is painful to listen to.

Incidentally, you've got 2 parts of the song played by the lead guitar, the guitar part and the backing chords which are usually played by strings. If you must use a guitar for it, try using a repeating electric bass.

Lastly, it would add a bit of uniqueness and make it sound better if you used instrumental ornaments - there were several points where a trill would have been ample, for instance.

otherwise, good try ^_^

Score: 8

"nice"

submission: Halloween is here

date: February 20, 2008

that's pretty good, have you thought about incorporating it into a full song?