HaniiPuppy's Reviews

["A Slice of the Action"]

fjoaiejfioajfoiena

@V742: Can you spell "Vore"?

Your cartoons never cease to amaze me ... I'm perplexed by you not having been paid to make a series.

[Rainbowball of Doom]

raehfkajehn

Bleh, I don't really see why it's referred to as a Beachball of Death, it normally goes away within a couple of seconds :P

[The Badger Song]

sihvoshovw

I don't really think this is that bad nor that great, hence the score.

Only reason I'm leaving a review is in reply to your 'author's comments'. The Llama Song is a newgrundian innovation :P

[Sushi Catapult]

It's frustrating that levels just abruptly stop once I reach the goal. I want be able to continue until I finish.

[Intel Was Wrong]

The game doesn't seem to be saving its progress - whenever I come back to it, my level progress is gone :\

Wolod responds:

It saves the progress within cookies of your browser. Check settings of your browser, maybe you are not saving cookies. Or maybe you've just cleared them.

[Cosmic Fisher]

gsergserg

It would be better if you didn't have to restart the game after you don't reach the target for a level - maybe if you just didn't proceed to the next level and only got a fraction of the gold that you earned for failed levels - say, 10-20%?

In light of that, it might be an idea to either reduce the inflation rate in the shop to maybe 1%? Or keep it at it's current levels, but eliminate inflation after failed levels.

Otherwise, it's a good, interesting game.

Loikare responds:

Thanks for your comments, inflation rate has been lowered to 2% instead of 5%

[Under Different Circumstances]

hudhvlz

The production side of the song is good, and it seems to be missing something. It also feels repetitive and it doesn't really go anywhere.

I realise that it's not actually that repetitive, but it feels very repetitive. Try changing which track has the focus every so often and make the leading track more prominent.

[Love Rocket]

amfojdsafljn

Just so you know, Classic Rock and Classical Rock are two different genres - Classical Rock is rock that incorporates techniques, sounds, and instruments used in Classical music.

Great song though :D Personally, I'd say just bring the backing guitar, bass, and drums up a bit. Or lower the solo guitar and the vocals.

Here's an idea: After the guitar solo, you could have kept the lead guitar going and accompanying the vocals with another contrasting guitar ... solo ...

Great song :D

Urbanus responds:

Wow thanks for the in depth review. I usually don't get that. I'll take your advice (along with sorohanro's) and see if I can't make it better. Would you mind taking a look at it when I'm done?

[Bull in Field - Swines]

Triadalithe

Awesome, great sounding - sounds like real punk.

Only piece of advice I can think of is maybe raise the volume of the vocals when the whole stereo thing's going on.

bullinfield responds:

haha, dont know what you were listening to but cheers dude!

[Self Portrait]

oO

You look like me if I had short hair.

And were an 18th century cavalryman.